Belén Esteban or Kate Middleton?
We agree that this two woman are very different but, why are they really famous? can we explain this fact? I think that they are the princess of the town. However, they are not the same thing.
Kate Middleton grew up in Britain ,but she was educated in the best schools and she lives in a world much more different than Belén. in addition, she is part of the nobility, she comes of the royal family and another culture.
In contrasting, Belén grew up in a poor neighborhood and her school education is much worse than Kate. She is known for be married with a famous bullfighter. and she was extremely popular for her polemic life, in which she has had a lot of problems with drugs, relationships and so on.
The only thing they have in common is that both have children, they are married and little more. The main and only thing that they are similar is the tittle of "the princess of the town" and anymore...
as a conclusion I would say that they are like day and the night , a point of view very subjective about this two ladies.
Well, Mr. Errante, here we can see a few mistakes, for example:
ResponderEliminar-...this two woman are very different...
-...of the town. However, they...
-...in Britain, but she...
-...than Belén. In addition, she...
-...she comes from the royal family...
And that's everything for me, Eva María is going to continue with this festival.
As Daniel has just said, I have found a very little errors:
ResponderEliminar-"In contrasting, Belén".
-"She is known".
-"The only thing that they have in common is that both have children".
-Change "For concluding" for "As a conclusion, ".
-"they are like Day and Night".
But hey! Don't Worry! Look at this "ultra-cute" photo
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Fede, I hope you can forgive us...maybe...some day.
ResponderEliminarAs my classmates have said above, I have found just a few mistakes:
ResponderEliminar-The princesses of the town (because you are talking about both of them and not of the tittle that they have)
-We agree (not ''we are agree'')
-She is known for being married (not ''be married'')
And that's everything. You will improve in the near future, don't worry!